In today's lesson we was only doing editing because we have gone past the filming deadline. As we was editing Sir was coming around and was looking at everyones films and giving feedback on what we have down and what we should do and how we can improve it to his expectations.
He had said why we had used those angles because they didn't look appropriate in that scene and why was the doomed hero was laughing at the end of his scene and that needed to be changed. Also why was the femme fatal was looking that the camera when it is was on the floor and that would mean the femme fatal would be talking to the doomed hero's shoes. And also he said we needed to improve the voice over and make it move with the femme fatals mouth and not make it look like she is mouthing it.
For the rest of the lessons we have been editing and trying to improve our clip and blogging on what I've been doing and editing my blog to see if there was any mistakes and making sure everything is up to date.
He had said why we had used those angles because they didn't look appropriate in that scene and why was the doomed hero was laughing at the end of his scene and that needed to be changed. Also why was the femme fatal was looking that the camera when it is was on the floor and that would mean the femme fatal would be talking to the doomed hero's shoes. And also he said we needed to improve the voice over and make it move with the femme fatals mouth and not make it look like she is mouthing it.
For the rest of the lessons we have been editing and trying to improve our clip and blogging on what I've been doing and editing my blog to see if there was any mistakes and making sure everything is up to date.