In today's lesson we was listening to everyone's scripts. People were doing it in film noir accents to see if it fitted and many people had really good accents which sounded really good,they pulled it off because they put a lot of effort into reading out the script.
People had a lot of good things about their scripts such as
*Great film noir words
*Awesome plots
*Connection towards the hero and the feme fetal
*Setting
*The way they would be presented
*Had typical Film Noir stuff
Some improvements to other would have been
*Scripts too long
*People could practice more with the accents
*They should make it sound Noir than an a English movie
*Some plots were too long and complicating
*Some of the action they wouldn't be able to do so they didn't think it through properly
*It could have been better if they took some useless parts to make it more interesting
People had a lot of good things about their scripts such as
*Great film noir words
*Awesome plots
*Connection towards the hero and the feme fetal
*Setting
*The way they would be presented
*Had typical Film Noir stuff
Some improvements to other would have been
*Scripts too long
*People could practice more with the accents
*They should make it sound Noir than an a English movie
*Some plots were too long and complicating
*Some of the action they wouldn't be able to do so they didn't think it through properly
*It could have been better if they took some useless parts to make it more interesting